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Technology Vs Traditional skills and Way of life


maryam2900 1 / -  
Aug 25, 2011   #1
It is probably true to say that technology caused that country develops,we can not deny technology change our style of life because it can influence our skills. in some cases technology maybe omited traditional skills and moved human to comfortable style of life with newest skill,newest skill caused increasing production or safe better human for example invented wheel help people to go around faster and better than later, but the other hand, some technology has negative effect on life and omited fast, for instance necluer weapon technology eliminated in most of country, and could not change ways of life although people try to change it for useful application, moreover in some case tradittional skills and new technology compound with to gether and make better life for human, for instans medicin treatment are very important for survay life and tradittional skills for treatment is very usefull and chemial medicine that produse by new technology are usefull too and when compound to gether for heal person are better results,for instance for treatment of cancer, doctors use both of them, people even shared their tradittional skills by new technology at internet or send e-mail.

as a result,i can say technology could not die out traditional skills and ways of life overally although could influnce them but it is mutal effects.
violetkau1 1 / 6  
Jun 10, 2013   #2
Ielts essay-When a country devolps its technology the traditional skill and the ways

I dont know what to be my thesis sentences. Could you help me?
i begin with:
one of the every governments aim is to develop the technology of its country so as to make life easier for its citizens.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Jun 12, 2013   #3
This does not give much information for us to understand your purpose of writing.
violetkau1 1 / 6  
Jun 16, 2013   #4
thank you, yes i;m preparing for Ielts exam


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