....good introduction :)
Although in some exceptional circumstances there seems to be some level of compatibility between technology and traditional cultures as in Japan for instance
.... well, this should have been in the introduction as this is to support your middle stand on the argument. However, you should not have so much details in the intro and tell everything very briefly.
When you start a new paragraph, a new idea is conveyed, and you must explain it thoroughly.
This is how you should go!
Also, you write very well :)