You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
describe what action you will take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
I am surprised to receive your letter saying that the noise from my flat has disturbed you for a long time.I am writing to explain the reasons and make apologize.
I fell terribly sorry to bother you.A couple of weeks ago,I found there was something wrong with my heating system.It is pretty cold in winter.Therefore I tried to solve the problems myself.I have to work daytime, so I did the repair work in the evening.I found the repairing touch and complicated.I must made loud noise.I have never thought the noise was so loud that it has disturbed you.
At present ,I have found two experienced worker to help me solve the problems.They promised they could fix these problems within this week.In addition,we will only work at daytime,so I am sure we will never disturb you in the evening.Please tell me how can I make up for what you have lost.I am planning on inviting you to a dinner.I really hope you could come.
If you could come ,please give me a phone call and please accept my apologize.
Could you please give me some suggestion and correction to this essay.I am sure there must be many "error" or "misuse".
Thank you very much indeed. :)
And, could you tell me the score of the essay it could get, if possible.(I guess it might be not very accurate ,but ,any suggestion is appreciated:))