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It takes failure to achive success. SAT


milamiller 4 / 6 5  
Nov 11, 2014   #1
Is there a person who has never failed any task? Do we even how how many tries it took scientists to drive a satellite which would go around the Earth? We all learn from our mistakes, we get more experienced and wiser after every failure we deal with. It helps us eliminate the wrong path we used in the past and improves our ability to think critically so we could not fail next time.

Back to the past, when I was in the nineth grade I found out about an exchange program for students called FLEX which allowed a pupil to get a full-paid academic year in one of the United States' high schools. Having studied more about the programs I participated and, unfortunately, did not even get to the third and the final tour. Instead of being taken down by the failure I decided to make a study plan for myself and study hard so I could give it a try the other year. And it actually worked! I made it to the third tour which made me feel completely satisfied and special because only 90 participants out of nearly 1000 get to the third tour. Well, honestly, I did not win the scholarship that year too. However, I got a brilliant and very useful experience.

Failure is actually a part of great success - it's aim is to teach people how to evaluate their strengths and weaknesses and at the same time to inspire them to improve both critical thinking skills and ability to be patient.
kitakaname 5 / 17 2  
Nov 11, 2014   #2
Okay, your experiences are good enough to talk about! SAT essay, however, requires a well-structured essay:)

Thus, you need to start with a introductory paragraph, write two body paragraphes, and then sum up with concluding paragraph!

Good luck
kitakaname 5 / 17 2  
Nov 11, 2014   #3
Ohhh... here is one more thing I can recommend.

Before you write SAT essay, you should prepare for two related experiences or incidents in the real world. These ideas will help you prove your ideas!
vangiespen - / 4,134 1449  
Nov 11, 2014   #4
Failure is actually a part of great success - it's aim is to teach people how to evaluate their strengths and weaknesses and at the same time to inspire them to improve both critical thinking skills and ability to be patient.

- I suggest that you bring this up as your introductory paragraph. It has an intriguing hook that makes the reader want to learn more about what you have to say about the topic and thus, works well for the purpose of making sure the statement will be read to the end.

Is there a person who has never failed any task? Do we even how how many tries it took scientists to drive a satellite which would go around the Earth? We all learn from our mistakes, we get more experienced and wiser after every failure we deal with. It helps us eliminate the wrong path we used in the past and improves our ability to think critically so we could not fail next time.

- The question is really irrelevant to the essay and can be omitted. However, the remaining sentences can be merged with the sentence that I told you will make a very good hook for this essay. It adds to the strength and validity of the statement you made.

Back to the past, when I was in the nineth grade I found out about an exchange program for students called FLEX which allowed a pupil to get a full-paid academic year in one of the United States' high schools. Having studied more about the programs I participated and, unfortunately, did not even get to the third and the final tour. Instead of being taken down by the failure I decided to make a study plan for myself and study hard so I could give it a try the other year. And it actually worked! I made it to the third tour which made me feel completely satisfied and special because only 90 participants out of nearly 1000 get to the third tour. Well, honestly, I did not win the scholarship that year too. However, I got a brilliant and very useful experience.

- When I was in the ...
- The sentence that you open with already makes it evident that you are talking about a past event in your life :-)


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