In the future,students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at at traditional schools.
College students already do!
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... deem studying at home by using technology as the premier choice, a
nd that is also my point.There are numerous reasons why I choose this method of studying,and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. ---- very nice introduction.
The main reason
why I agree with ...
The main reason for my agreement with...
...always work under the guide of teachers -- especially when you face
problems in study. In school, you don't have to worry about problems, as the teacher will show you how...
In contrast, at home students use technology to study
subjects, and that means they have to find information on their own, which is more effective than when they are provided it.---- Good point! That is called "active learning" or "cognitive engagement of the learning material."
Additionally,knowledge in traditional schools is limited to textbooks, whereas just a click of mouse you can access websites with full of information in any field. In a word,from reasons I've mentioned above,you might get the idea that I'd prefer studying at home using technology,which I think is the best method of study.
helping me study better.
Well, I disagree!! :-D In a traditional classroom, computers are used. In a traditional classroom, teachers try to achieve active learning. In a traditional classroom, teachers often require students to find the answers themselves. So, traditional classrooms have everything online classrooms have and one more thing: a teacher!