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Nowadays students are using the Internet as a prompt to receive good marks rather


Real Fog 5 / 26  
May 5, 2011   #1
Nowadays students are using the Internet as a prompt to receive good marks rather than preparing course work by themselves.

Give your opinion and suggest possible solutions.


No one can deny the fact that the Internet plays a great role in our lives. Many people are using it daily, for a variety of purposes, particularly for education; It has been claimed that the Internet is deteriorating a learning process by allowing cunning students to cheat in examinations.

As well as offering numerous advantages, the Internet has disadvantages though, namely in terms of education. A current condition has showed that the information availability on the Net serves not only as a tool for self-studying, but for gaining unfair credits. For example, a student with no ability or desire to do course work (projects, assignments) can simply download a required material and present as if he had done it by himself. Consequently, there will be one more ineffective graduate. A single useless worker is not a significant problem for a company, but if there are thousands of them, there should be taken a serious action.

As to the solutions, I think the main thing, which should be taken into consideration is the way students are examined. Rather that giving a certain period of time for preparing paper-based projects, the university authorities can asset students' abilities by putting oral examinations. If there is no opportunity to evaluate them all verbally, as it might be time-consuming, teachers can urge their students to sit a formal examination, which, to my mind, is a relatively effective solution for this pattern.

In conclusion, I have an impression that the way young generations are taught is a superbly significant matter as is determines the general view of the nearest future. Therefore, we should elaborate existing bias and pay attention to every single detail, so that the coming generation will not suffer from our decisions.

Thank you for your time and corrections =)
subhash_ghosh 11 / 29  
May 6, 2011   #2
Many people are using it daily, for a variety of purposes, particularly for education; It has been claimed that the Internet is deteriorating a learning process by allowing cunning students to cheat in examinations. - Many people are using it daily for a variety of purposes - particularly for education. It has been claimed that Internet is debilitating the established/standard process of learning by enabling unscrupulous students to cheat in examinations.

As well as offering numerous advantages, the Internet has disadvantages though, namely in terms of education. - Although the Internet offers numerous advantages, it has a few disadvantages also, especially in the realms of education.

A current condition has showed that the information availability on the Net serves not only as a tool for self-studying, but for gaining unfair credits. - One recent study has shown that the information available on Internet helps not only to do self-study, but also to gain unfair credits.

@Turbina, a few more grammatical errors are there in the essay. Your ideas are crisp and clear, just weed out the errors and the essay will be a great work to read.

Also, while talking about internet, you've jumped suddenly to :

In conclusion, I have an impression that the way young generations are taught is a superbly significant matter as is determines the general view of the nearest future. Therefore, we should elaborate existing bias and pay attention to every single detail, so that the coming generation will not suffer from our decisions.

This transition should be smooth, and fit in properly with other paragraphs.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
May 7, 2011   #3
Do not capitalize the first word after a semi-colon.
...; It has it has ...

In addition to offering numerous advantages, the Internet has disadvantages, namely in terms of education.

A current condition has showed shown that the information availability on the Net serves not only as a tool for self-study but also for gaining unfair credits.

For example, a student with no ability or desire to do course work (projects, assignments) can simply download a the required material and present it as if he had done it by himself.

... if there are thousands of them serious action should be taken.

...by putting administering oral examinations.

Therefore, we should elaborate existing bias ??? I don't understand that part.

:-)


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