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Why do some students study abroad? Review my TOEFL.


claros 1 / 1  
Aug 12, 2010   #1
Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

At the universities in some careers sometimes offer study programs about interchange between countries and then students can finish their studies there. Other opportunities occur when students have graduated either exist the possibility to postulate scholarship. Both programs are select by many students because they have the alternative to study in important and recognize universities, to know other places and learn other languages like English, French among others.

Studies in an important foreign university are a plus in their careers. Professional people sometime do not have so much lucky or opportunities of growth in their jobs because the important charges are occupied by people with master or MBA for example. Especially in regions it is really important in higher charges that people had studied in recognize universities and if people have studies abroad is better. A lot of professional in regions think working in Santiago and then coming back their cities by new and better opportunities. And in last time, young professional people have emigrated to complement their studies abroad in universities programs. For example, in ConcepciĆ³n University in the fourth year career, the students can start a MBA and do a quarter in a foreign university called Wright State University in Ohio, US.

When the people are students sometimes they do not have enough money to travel abroad. Thus to study abroad is a good opportunity for this. If a student postulates a foreign university he or she will have a lot o possibility to choose among some ones. For example when a student have interest in antique culture they can choose a European university and in this time he or he should visit a lot of places with history and importance in art, paint, etc. So, depend on the interesting students can choose different places where they can know places accord to this.

Now in important companies there are request like languages. If the professional person has a good level in a language they will have more chance to obtain the opportunity. In occupational websites when professional are looking for a job they can read request: with intermediate English, manage speak and writing English level, etc. In the university the opportunity to travel abroad by study it is a good idea for to learn other language like english. Now, the students feel that it is really necessary to live this experience in the real country because you stay closer with the language, they can practice all time and to know in shorter time that in a chilean institute.

No matter the reason because students are deciding to study abroad, it is really important to mention that these situation are more communes. In only three reasons can look the importance for the students choose other kind of opportunities. To speak, write and know other language is a important plus in their careers. When people have the opportunity to know different places, study abroad is a excellent chance to do. And if student have vision in their professional career they can choose opportune way study abroad. How told me my professor you never must leave a opportunity respect to other country because you will have open mind.
lowryder49 7 / 31  
Aug 12, 2010   #2
At the Universities sometimes offer interchange study programs interchange between countries and then through them,students can finish their studies in a foreign country. In addition,other opportunities occur when students have graduated either exist the possibility graduated students can have the opportunity to apply for specific grants in their fields outside their native country.the possibility to postulate scholarship Both programs are select by many students because they have the alternative to they can study in important and recognize universities, they getto know other places and learn other languages like English, French among others.

... are occupied by people with master or MBA for example . Especially in regions it is really important infor higher chargesposts that people had studied in recognize universities and if people have studiestaking a course abroad is even better. A lot of professionalsin regions think working in Santiago and then coming back their cities by new and better opportunitiestravel to work to large cities and afterwards they returne to their hometowns where get better jobs. And in last time Furthermore, young professional people ... . For example, in ConcepciĆ³n University in the fourth year career, the students can start a MBA and do a quarter in a foreign university called Wright State University in Ohio, US.which will definitly be benefitial in the long run.

When the people are Students sometimes they do not have enough money to travel abroad. Thus interchange study programs are a good opportunity for this them. If a student postulates a foreign university he or she will have a lot o possibility to choose among some ones . For example when a student have (...) and importance in art, paint, and so onetc . So, depend on the interesting students

... they can choose different places where they can know places accord to this.to complement their especiality.

So far, is what I have check I will recommend you to try to be less personal and discuss more about your thesis which is study in important and recognize universities, to know other places and learn other languages and should be a paragraph for each benefit that is the importance of studying in recognize universities which I already checked, 2 the opportunity to know other places which I personally think is not well supported give more detail of the benefits of knowing these foreign places for a student or professional and 3 the importance of learning other languages supported by specific reason and how they will learn

Good luck
Lorena
OP claros 1 / 1  
Aug 12, 2010   #3
Thank you Lorena, I am reviewing my essay. I'll follow you recommendation.
Regards

Natalia
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Aug 15, 2010   #4
...that these situation are more common.--- is this supposed to say 'common'??

Also, I think you should list the three reasons in a single sentence at the end of paragraph number one. That way, the reader will understand easily what you mean.

If you type the essay again and use Lorena's corrections, I think it will help you improve! Just try! Even if you make more mistakes, we will keep trying to help you improve your skill.

:-)


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