Juveniles tend to be indifferent to others and lack respects
.... lack respect ...not respects :)
There are various factors that contribute tothethis phenomenon.
.... "this" sounds better
Good Introduction and well presented :)
Owing to the development of mass media, youngsters today are exposed more to violent and pornographic information, which are quiteimproper for students.
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.... you can also say they can have dangerous consequences.provide approaches to inappropriate contents
provide access to inappropriate contentsIt's a very well written essay; good presentation and excellent vocabulary !
You really don't have to worry about this task! Good Luck!