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When to start formal education for children?


hosseinrooh2010 1 / -  
Jul 22, 2013   #1
(Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Other believed that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?)

One of the biggest questions for parents about their children is about the way that their children spend their childhood on. Some believe that children should spend childhood just on playing and doing childhood's activities, but others think that childhood is a period of time that should be specialized for learning and educating.

In my opinion, neither just playing nor just studying can be productive alone, and both of them should do concurrently in childhood.
Some parents think that childhood is a unique time for children to have fun, and enjoy from playing and spending time with other children. They have an idea that the rest of the life is probably enough hard for human's to appreciate childhood. They state this claim in base on that, most of the people reminisce their childhood as golden ages, and because of it, children should be free to do children activities. In addition, it has proven that, childhood activities have significant effects in people, in the rest of their life. For instance, these activities help children to have healthier bodies when they become older. Also these activities help them to flourish their mind and increase their abilities.

On the other hand, some people think that childhood is the best time for learning, so they want their spend more time on studying, or even they want their children start learning formal things as soon as it is possible.

In fact, during the childhood mind is fundamentally fresh and ready for learning. For instance, it has observed some children have been able to learn complicated things in early ages, for instance memorizing books like The Quran, in just six years-old age. In addition, this people believe that, if the children start learning earlier, they will have more time for promoting. An outstanding example is a man who has managed to have his doctoral degree when he was just 19 years-old.

In my opinion, children should do these activities with each other, and they are both necessary for them. They could learn things properly, just if they have fresh mind and healthy body. On the other hand, they will be able to choose the best way for their life and their affairs, if they are enough knowledgeable. They should study sufficiently and alongside it they should be active, like what is expected from a child.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Jul 22, 2013   #2
, but others think that childhood is a period of time that should be specialized for learning and educating.

.... Try to present your ideas in a more simple, yet interesting manner.
...., however, others think that children should begin schooling at an early age and engage in classroom activities.

In my opinion, neither just playing nor just studying can be productive alone, and both of them should do concurrently in childhood.

... this should be incorporated in your introduction.
aaricevans - / 1  
Jul 22, 2013   #3
Very nice and informative post. thanks
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Jul 22, 2013   #4
yep... you need to attend to the structure.

Some parents think that childhood is a unique time for children to have fun, and enjoyfrom playing and spending time with other children.

They have an idea that the rest of the life is probablyenough hard enough for human's to appreciate childhood.They state this claim in base on that, most of the people reminisce their childhood as golden ages, and because of it, children should be free to do children activities.

... I feel you should stress the fact that;
They view childhood as the only phase in lour lives that is free from responsibilities and other worries. Therefore they argue that adults should not deprive children of enjoying this unique period of their lives by burdening them with school related activities.


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