The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring?
hey every one, i am getting ready for my IELTS exam and this is the third essay that i do present in here, i would appreciate your feedback.
The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.
The 20st century changed our life style in many ways. Infact, It had significant impact on our lifes that it may seems hard to live without electricity,phones,internet. But,the 21 centrury is going to be new era and step forward to ambitous that we are calling imagination today.here are some examples:
Transporatation is the greatest aspect that would be effected by 21st century.cars that can fly like airplanes and the new generation of planes and trains taht could breake any speed limits would no longer be a dream. In despite of the fact that we already landed on the moon,ordinary people could travel to other plants and spend some time in space.
As far as communication concerened, People are trying to communicate with each other through internet or video calls and the meetings in real world decreasing dramaticly. However, this kind of communication has some bad effects on everyone, the virtual life is playing big role in people's lifes and emtions and respecting to some beliefs may forgotten and robots and dogs may be used instead of humans as your company.
The rate of distance education is rising dramatically, and it would be easier to participate in classes or even write student's thesises based on a variety of sources that are freely shared on the internet or the university site. Nevertheless, Technology is
going to count as an essential part of life and as a result, some traditons may be gone by that time.
In onclusion, I do belive that in 21century living in other planets and imagination are no longer an issue, and human could reach their dreams easier than it used to be.
would be affected...
affect = verb
effect = noun
2 words, not one word: In fact
I see some little typos and spelling errors:
In onclusion, I do belive that in 21century living in other planets and imagination are no longer an issue, and human could reach their dreams easier than it used to be.
Do you know what I typo is? Be careful to avoid silly little errors. :-)
I can't give a score, because I don't know the scoring criteria.
