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"My sociable mother" - describe a person you admire


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Jan 18, 2011, 09:50am   #1
Hi
Please tell me about this essay I wrote about a person I admire, and I choose 2 characteristics that describe his personality.

i am going to write about my mother. shi is called vija and she is in her middle thirties. she lives in riga with me and my father. we have a big house, actually it is too big for our small family. she works in big company as an accountant. my mother loves floristic, it is her hobby. she likes exotic food, especially sushi, but she cant stand boring things, such as chess.

she has an oval face shape, red lipstick on her lips, her blond hair is always curly and she has a big round blue eyes. she has a great taste ans she is very fashionable. i think she is really good-looking women. i admire her for her personality which is a mix of honesty and strong faith in herself, cause and effect. she is kind but strickt. she is hard-working, for example, she often works at nights.

she is very sociable, she has a lot of friends ands everyones love her, ecpecially i. she gets on with most of people and is very patient, particulary when i ask for a help at studies.

Jan 18, 2011, 10:41am   #2
i am going to write about Mymy mother., shi is called Vija and she is in her middle thirties. She lives with myfather and Iin Riga with me and my father. We have a big house and it is actually too big for our small family. She works in a big company as an accountant. My mother's favorite hobby is her love for flowers.floristic, it is her hobby. She [font#FF0000]also enjoyslikes exotic food, especially sushi, but she can't stand boring things, such as chess.

She has an oval face shape, with red lipstick on her lips, and her blond hair is always curly when she looks at me with herand she has a big round blue eyes. To me, she has a great taste andans she is very fashionable. I think she is a really good-looking women. I admire her for her personality, which is a mix of honesty and a [font#FF0000][/font]strong faith in herself. cause and effect. She is kind but strict.strickt. She is also very hard-working., for example, she often works at nights.She is very sociable with, she has a lot of friends, and everyone loves her, especially meecpecially i. She gets along on with most of people and is very patient, particularly particulary when I ask for a help with my at studies.



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