Air pollution is a
many countries all over the world
. E specially for
, especially advance country. The air pollution problem often happens
in capital city like Mexico City, Bangkok , New York even Jakarta .The date
22 september 2O11
will be an opportunity to find another way for just one day is the only day
to get around town without by private vehicle
eave the car at home and such as
a bus,train or cycling
All this is
This is to help highlight the consequences of
pollution caused by cars' emission,
not just fumes but the whole cycle of waste and disruption, the and
delayed journeys, and
the whole human misery
resulted by traffic congestion
and car pollution
. In fact
, Almost 4O% of the transport sector's CO2 emissions are produced by the use of private cars in cities.
The air pollution was
vehicles gases,ciggaretes smoke,factories gases, carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide etc.
many sources but the
major one is vehicles gases
because several city with the worst air pollution,polluted the air by vehicles gases
and the second
Air pollution causes
For example, the air quality in many
capital cities [font#FF0000]or big cities
are [/font]getting worse
,there is so many smoke,gases, carbon monoxide [CO], and carbon dioxide [CO2] that can make people sick
.Other adverse effect is more people are in air-pollution- related deseases
Kind of disease that cause by air pollution
such as asthmatic,pneumonia, tuberculosis,influenza, etc. it can happen because the emission of vehicles gases too high. Dust and smoke make germs spread faster.
The consequence of air pollution problems in capital city
getting worst are deteriorating
. Several capital city from all over the world are
the car free day. at
First, it is
apply in a few advance countryies
with the worst air pollution, but the capital cities
of developing countries also begin to apply it.
Car Free Day are
once a week on weekend or Sunday. Government expect
.it can discharged
reduce the extra global warming gases into the atmosphere. On car free day people usually do some activities like sport or do some hobbies. Car free day excecute on the main roads
crowd. The governments also do some programs like bike every Sunday or we used to call that 'bike to nature'.
Although car free day programs often excecute???
but in fact the air pollution was
not getting better,
instead of mor e increase than before
. It is because there is so many motor vehicles Plied the city road. The public transportation also make the problem of pollution get
worse. It prove that car free day program is not effective.
Actually people are
happy with car free day programs. They
are also participate
also participate in this program. Several of them go to work with the public transportation but they also sometimes use their private vehicles. Of course, this habbit can discharged air pollution, even it's slowly.
Except doing the car free day program government should do another way and find another solution for
discharging the atmosphere from the air pollution which is getting worse.If we see the results
from the car free day program. We can say that car free day program is fail or
. There are so many things
that government must do like puting
forward that all motor vehicles must be checked regularly. The city council propose to achieve that not only by making regular emission checks compulsory, but by banning from the streets all public transportation vehicles older than 1O years and private cars older than 15 years.
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Secondly, There are many serious mistakes in your writing. You didnot paying attention to your grammar such as V-ing after preposition or near future, or relative clauses. You also made many repitition only in using word but also in ideas.