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study groupNowadays, study in team becomes a trend because it is a sort of method that provides a different learning style compared to conventional one(this is lack of clarity) . While the cons of the issue are existent around community, I strongly believe that there also some pros come along with this case(you need a verb) .
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but this is now a serious problem due to the number of criminals is rapidly growing in society even punishment is exist for the evil doers.
three verbs need two conjunctions.It is true that majority of adult people spend nearly all of their time infor working due to pursuing an happiness,as the basic need of humanwell- being. While it seems that there are some aspects which influence the job satisfaction itself , a gap between workers' expectation in experiencing happiness and what it seems to be a reality is still exist.
According to some findings, foreign language should be learnt by the young learners inearlier age rather than in high school(this sounds vague) . I, too, strongly believe that this trend give a positive development instead of the drawback to this case .
In conclusion, although there are some demerits that should be concerned carefully, the benefits of this(where this refers to?) trend are more considerable. Thus, the children should learn foreign language in the earlier age because it is easy to acquire languages in that stage.
With the advanced of aviation, it is easier today to travel around the world. People, however, claim that the advantages of air travel these days is only for the people who have a good financial(financial is an adjective which is need a noun to form noun clause) . Therefore, I strongly argue that there have been possible answers for the following issue.
Nowadays, some people believe that parents holdplay an important role in guiding their children to be useful-beings in society. On other hand, others' point of view indicates that the schools, (omit the comma) is the one whom takes the responsibility (what kind of responsibility, you need to clarify this) . It seems to me that the children growth should be watched by parental care, while I too believe controlling the students' behavior involved the whole member of school community.