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do you prefer to have big or small family? and Why?


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I grew up in a big family and it was really good, I have 7 brothers and two sisters and my parents, so there were lots of people around and I think a big family is good. You're never lonely and there's always someone to hang around with or play with or do something with and lots of things to share, in addition you learn some good values being patient and cooperative.

What is better between having big or small family? Is depends on the age of the person. I think it is valuable for any kid to have brothers and sisters, to share your thinking, interesting, and your special memories, someone you can trust, and feedback your faults.

On The other hand, it is better to just have a very small family especially for parents, maybe just one or two children because things are so expensive and it's just really hard to raise a big family nowadays.

In conclusion, and as I have a big family, I prefer to have small one consist of one or two kids with my wife and I. So I can take care of them more and focus of their education and lives.

1) A suggestion:

What is better between having big or small family? It depends on the age of the person. I think it is valuable for any kid to have brothers and sisters (you might have used "siblings"), to share your thoughts, interests, and your special memories, someone you can trust, and feedback your faults.

(But I'm not really good at this, English is not my native language).

2) According to French pundit Pierre Bourdieu, the ones who decide to have just a few children usually belong to middle classes. Really rich people and poor ones usually have a large offspring.
Hi Hadi!
I'm just giving some suggestions on your piece.

I grew up in a big family and it was really good large family and the experience was truly memorable. I have 7 brothers and two sisters and my parents, so there were lots of people around and I think a big family is good. Along with our parents, my nine siblings and I lived in (describe your home as in where it was, how it was and so on) You're never lonely and there's always someone to hang around with or play with or do something with and lots of things to share, in In addition you learn some good values moral values on being patient and cooperative. (Your sentence is fine but try and break it up into 2 smaller sentences otherwise they just become too long)
What is better between having big or small family? IsIt depends on the age of the person. I think it is valuable for any kid Child ( try and use formal language as far as possible) to have brothers and sisters, to share your thinking, interesting, and your special memories thoughts, interests and special memories. someone you can trust, feedback your faults and never fail to correct your flaws.

On The other hand, it is better to just have a very small family especially for parents, maybe just one or two children because [s]things are so expensive and it's just really hard to raise a big family nowadays.[/s] due to the large expenses associated.

In conclusion, and as I have a big family, I prefer to have a small one consisting of one or two kids children with my wife and I. So I can take care of them more and focus of their education and lives. In that way, I could take better care of them and focus more on their lives.

I'm guessing you are young judging by your language. Just make sure to not make sentences to long and use formal language as far as possible. Otherwise it was a good essay.
Hope it helped!! (:



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