some who decline job offers
In IELTS, I suggest that you'd better write "some people", instead of some, which seems incomplete thought.
both negative and positive trend, which depends
both negative and positive trends, which depend
Job offer rejections bring two serious problems.
It is because the prompt is asking about
Give your opinion and provide relevant examples.
, it is always good to start with
I would argue that until a few years ago, there was a taboo around the subject of not getting the job offers due to some personal reasons like ages and circumstances.