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People listen to music for different reasons at different times


hanyoojung 3 / 16 2  
Dec 13, 2013   #1
People listen to music for different reasons at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

Nowadays, more than half the population on earth enjoy listening to music and making music. There are also a lot of people who take music as their professions, like singers, musicians, and dancers. Why is this so? Music has a lot of positive effects on people, that can even completely change the lives of people. Music can soothe the minds of people, give hope to others, and some people listen to music as a form of entertainment.

After the two world wars, there were countless people who got traumatized by everything they saw and heard. Some people even went crazy after this. After World War 2, people started using music as a form of healing. A lot of music therapists let the traumatized people listen to soothing and calm music to give them peace at heart. There is no evidence that it is effective, but a lot of people recovered from their psychologically affected minds through music.

Music can also give hope to people. Some songs have nice lyrics, but some have really bad ones. Nice lyrics can make people who have lost their hopes gain them back again by telling them that anything is possible. There is a Korean song entitled "A Goose's Dream" and the lyrics is about a goose that is being teased and talked about because it cannot fly, but the goose is saying that one day it is going to show the world that it can fly across the wall and to the sky. This song has been in the top chart for a lot of weeks because the lyrics give hope to a lot of people.

People like me listen and make music just for fun. I play the piano as a hobby when I am bored and I listen to music every day before and after going to school. Most of the time, I play the songs I listen to and I feel the happiness by being able to play them. Honestly, I cannot imagine life without music.

As a conclusion, I can say that people listen to music mainly because it can pacify them, give hope to them, and as a hobby. There are a lot of people who even make music their profession. That is how much music is important to people nowadays.
greenleaf 4 / 20 7  
Dec 13, 2013   #2
People like me listen and make music just for fun. I play the piano as a hobby when I am bored and I listen to music every day before and after going to school. Most of the time, I play the songs I listen to and I feel the happiness by being able to play them. Honestly, I cannot imagine life without music.

I find this paragraph irrelevant to the topic. You didn't give reasons why music is so important to many people, but just presented your personal experiences.


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