Whether or not people should have hobbies and do physical activities has been a controversial question.
No, this is not the question. The question is whether or not people should have hobbies and do physical activities are different from their work.
Looking at the computer screen all day long can put us in a daze, so doing some sports and hobbies can prevent us from becoming too fat or short-sighted.
****When you say TOO MUCH, use 2 o's. Use tooooo many o's. See what I mean? The word too has 2 o's if it means TOO MUCH.
My neighbor Tom once was a computer engineer in a big company. He ate fast food everyday and never went out to exercise. When he found out that he was too fat to find a girlfriend, he made up his mind to
loose lose weight.
Use the past tense:
He started to jog every morning. After a
moth month, he was thinner and found a girlfriend.
Last, we should develop at least one personal hobby, not to show off, but express our emotion when we feel depressed or pressured. Playing musical instruments is a good way. I can play classical guitar. ---I made it 2 sentences.
When I meet difficulties in studies, I will take my guitar and play the song Green Sleeves. ---I think that is the same music for a Christian song called "What Child is This?"
:-) great job, keep practicing.