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Parents are best teachers. do you agree with this idea


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Parents are best teacher. This is an old saying. Some people agree with this idea, some do not agree. There is idea exist. The important...

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[font#FF0000]There is an old saying that
parents are best teacher. Some people agree with this statement, some do not agree. There is idea exist. The important lesson is life. The best teachers for the life are parents.
The most important subject is life. repetitionThe best teachers for that subject are parents. Parents prepare their children to the life. Children learn from parents how to deal with problem. They get good advices that they use in their future life. For example I can write about my teacher. He always advices me to hear listen [font#FF0000][/font]my parent. He says that I can get good advices from my parents. Eventually, I can benefit from that advices in the future. He has done like that. Therefore, he has made good career and succeeded in life.
Generally, people should count their parents as their life teacher. Cause they are more experienced life. They could teach us about life from their own practice. This information could be very useful. Cause, this information has been proven. People learn from their mistakes in their life not to make that mistake again. Therefore, children should learn from their parents to make fewer mistakes.
To my point I agree with this idea that, parents are the best teacher. They teach the most important subject. This subject is very hard and changeable
May 16, 2010, 10:21am   #3
Parents are the best teacher ( you coud say that The parents are the best educator for their children ever) . This is an old
saying (say). Some people agree with this idea, some do not agree( you have to change your sentences to be more complicated) like there has been some debate over whether the parents are the best instructor to teach their children and provide suitable nurture that would beneft the child from childhood untill late adulthood or the school could be the substituent . There is idea exist ( it's redundant). The important lesson is life. The best teachers for the life are parents ( unnecessarily sentence).
The most important subject is life. The best teachers for that subject are parents ( repetitive say! ). Parents prepare their children to the life. Children learn from parents how to deal with problem (abundant sentence). They could get applicable advices that might be advantegous for their following future . For example I can write about my teacher. He always advices me to hear my parent (it's preferable to utilize passive voice or past participle). He says that I can get good advices from my parents. Eventually, I can get benefit from that advices( try to use variety of suitable verbs and nouns like recommendations in stead of advices, be away from repitition) in the future. He has done like that( rebundant words). Therefore, he has made( get , achieve, attain try to use different and suitable expressions) good career and succeeded in life ( successful or prosperous life).
Generally, people should count( consider) their parents as their life's teacher.Because they had got more experienced life. They could teach us about life from their own practice. This information could be very useful. Cause, this information has been proven. People learn from their mistakes in their life not to make that mistake again. Therefore, children should learn from their parents to make fewer mistakes.
To my point I agree with this idea that, parents are the best teacher. They teach the most important subject. This subject is very hard and changeable.
May 16, 2010, 12:15pm   #4
Generally, people should count( consider) their parents as their life's teacher.Because they had got more experienced life. They could teach us about life from their own practice. This information could be very useful. Cause, this information has been proven. People learn from their mistakes in their life not to make that mistake again. Therefore, children should learn from their parents to make fewer mistakes.


Because we learn from our parents experienced life, they could teach us about life from their own practice. This proven information has been very useful, results in learning not to make the same mistakes as they did.
Jun 1, 2010, 03:13am   #5
Shukur:
Parents are the best teachers. This is an old saying. Some people agree with this idea, some do not agree. There is idea exist. The important lesson is life. The best teachers for the life are parents.
The most important subject is life. The best teachers for that subject are parents. Parents prepare their children to the life. Children learn from parents how to deal with problems. They get good advices that they will use in their future life. For example I can write about my teacher. He always advices me to hear my parents. He says that I can get good advices from my parents. Eventually, I can benefit from that these advices in the future. He has done like that. Therefore, he has made good career and succeeded in life.
Generally, people should count their parents as their life teacher. Cause they are more experienced life. They could teach us about life from their own practice experiences. This information could be very useful. Cause, this information has been proven. People learn who have learned from their mistakes in their life not to will never make that mistake again. Therefore, children should learn from their parents to make fewer mistakes.
To my point I agree with this idea that, parents are the best teachers. They teach us the most important subject. This subject is very hard and changeable.

hi~~

Parents are the best teachers. This is an old saying. Some people agree with this statement, but some do not agree. Personally, I think the most important lesson is about our life; so the best teachers are our parents.

Parents have prepared everything for their children. Children learn from their parents how to deal with the problems they face. They get good advices from their parents that they could use in their future life. My teacher always advises me to listen to my parents. He even says that I can get good advices from my parents. Eventually, I can benefit from those advices in the future. My teacher has always been listening to his parents' advices. Therefore, he has made a very good career and success in life.



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