Please l want some one to check the mistakes on what l wrote about dreams.
Hmmm.... I don't see you offering help to others. But, OK.
Dreams are just like flowers,we can't imagine our life without and as such we have to take care of just as we do with flowers to grow up as we want.
This starts with a comma splice. The clauses on both sides of the comma are complete sentences. Therefore, that comma ought to be either a period or a semi-colon. In addition, the second clause is confusing, with some missing words and some extra words. I think what you are trying to say is:
Dreams are just like flowers. We can't imagine our life without them, and
as such we have to take care of them just as we do with flowers so that they will grow up as we want.