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'obliged to do what you don't like' - essay on doing jobs people don't like


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Mar 27, 2012, 08:43am   #1
Doing a job that you don't like is a wast of time.


Looking at the world today, there are so many people who are doing jobs they don't like and when they are asked why they simply answer there are no other choices for them. However, this creats lot of troubles and restless in these people's life. People should be in places they love and do work thay want and appreciate.



Prents puch their children to major in field they sometimes don't like which results in a total failure and leads most of the time to having jobs they don't really like and appreciate. Being obliged to do what you don't like is a catastrophe for not only people who work but also the ones they work with and the job itself. These people are not doing their correctly, they aren't going to look forwards to ameliorate it and they aren't going to feel happy about it. They give a bad image about their jobs by curcing it all the time. More than this they affect the one they work with especially if they are chiefs. The worst is the problems spread to affect the whole life of person, his wife, kids and friends.
Mar 27, 2012, 10:28pm   #2
Looking at the world today, there are so many people who are doing jobs they don't like and when they are asked why they simply answer there are no other choices for them. However, this creates lot of troubles and restlessness (and resentments)
in these people's lives. People should be in places they love and do work they want and appreciate.



Parents push there children to major in fields they sometimes don't like which results in a total failure and leads most of the time to having jobs they don't really like and appreciate. Being obligated to do what you don't like is a catastrophe for not only people who work but also the ones they work with and the job itself. These people are not doing their work correctly, they aren't going to look forward to ameliorate it and they aren't going to feel happy about it. They give a bad image about their jobs by cursing it all the time. More than this, they affect the ones they work with - especially if they are chiefs. The worst is the problems spread to affect the whole life of person, his wife--their spouse , kids and friends.

Closing statement?
In the beginning, you are writting about the people that do the work they don't like as if they were liars. I don't like it. Maybe you could add some reasons to support their arguments, because in certain cases they are right.I don't mean that you should make excuses for them, but you can't condemn all of them.
Sorry... Just my opinion. I hope it doesn't offend you.
Impressive. I won't correct your grammatical mistakes in order not to make new ones, because I'm not a native speaker. Could you write more about Morocco's situation? I'm genuinely interested. By the way, do you know Badr Hari and Gad Elmaleh?
Hello, I ve just read about the two guys u talk about. I wonder why u ask about them?

writing about my country is a duty because i love it so much and i want it to be better than what it is /

thanks
Well, both of them came from Morocco. They are extremely good in what they do. So I just wanted to know if they were famous in their country of origin. When i watch Gad Elmaleh's sketches I can't stop laughing. Have you seen any of them?



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