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Number of languages in the world and its impact on global safety


Vihuynh 6 / 10  
Jun 9, 2014   #1
There are a lot of different countries on the world, so that lead to have many different cultures and diverse languages. However, every year, several languages die out. Some people think that would be bad because the human will lose the diversity of culture by this problem. In contrast, others opinions argue that would be good if there are fewer languages in the world. Personally, I totally agree with this idea by three reasons below.

The first reason is when the world just has few languages that will make people closer because they can easily communicate together. In addition, some countries can cut down the cost and time to foreign language education, and they can use money for the other problem like: helping poor people or enhancing quality of living.

Secondly, because of barrier language, leading to be different culture and civilization between many countries in the world, but now they can exchange together because it will be less than barrier language. That is absolutely a good opportunity for some developing countries because they can easily learn knowledge from developed countries, and of course quality of living will be increase quicker.

Thirdly, the world will avoid a lot of conflicts and discrimination when they use less language. As you know there are a lot of arguments were happening between many countries with different culture and language. By the way, I think that the peace will be kept safety if people just use fewer languages.

In short, base on some reasons above, I strongly agree to have fewer languages on the world because that have a lot of advantages for people
StephanieGreer 1 / 2 1  
Jun 9, 2014   #2
There are different countries around the world, so that has led to have many different cultures and diverse languages. However, every year several languages die out. Some people think this would be bad because humans will lose their diversity of culture if that were to happen . In contrast, other opinions argue that it would be beneficial if there are fewer languages in the world. Personally, I agree with this idea by three reasons below.

The first reason is if the world just has fewer languages, it will make people from different cultures closer because they can easily communicate with each other . In addition, some countries can cut down on the cost and time of foreign language education. Then they can use the extra money for the other problems like: helping poor people or enhancing quality of living.

Secondly, because of barriers in language there is a difficulty leading to one or more countries. With fewer languages there would be less of a barrier in language and they could exchange easier. That is absolutely a good opportunity for some developing countries because they can easily gain knowledge from developed countries, and of course quality of living would increase at a faster rate .

Finally , the world would avoid a lot of conflicts and discrimination if they used fewer languages . As you know there are a lot of arguments happening between countries with different cultures and languages. By the way, I believe that the peace will be kept safe if people just use fewer languages. Why would they be safer?

In short, bases on the reasons given above, I strongly agree that fewer languages around the world would lead to a lot of advantages for people living in society.
OP Vihuynh 6 / 10  
Jun 11, 2014   #3
thanks for your helping
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Jul 21, 2014   #4
You should have mentioned the purpose of writing this essay, for example - IELTS, TOEFL etc., in the title itself. That helps you earn more task relevant feedbacks from others. The next point is that you should have included the full prompt in the same post for us to get a better understanding about it. That helps us align our comments better with your topic :)

There are a lot of different countries onin the world, soand that leads to have many different cultures and diverse languages.


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