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Many Teachers assign homeworks to student everyday. Homework = Progress?


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Jan 14, 2012, 08:33am   #1
Please correct my essay.

Many Teachers assign homeworks to student everyday. Do you think that daily homeworks is necessary for student? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

There are various ideas assigning homeworks to student. Each teacher has their own methods. Some people think that the homework is important but others think opposite side of it. From my point of view it is neccessary in student's life. The reason is that it helps to practise, worki independently and not to waste for useless activities. In this essay I will explain the reason of importance of homework in student's life.

Generally, i think the homework is the best way to practise the lesson which a teacher taught students at school. The teachers alwasy try to give their knowledge to students. However, the teachers would check how their students realise the lesson with the help of homework. For exaple, when a student does not do the homeworks, may be some important part of lesson was forgotten owing to not to practise, reread the lesson and do homeworks, it will be easier to recollect a lesson.

Secondly, the teachers give homeworks to students working and doing it independently without help of anyone. Furthemore, doing without assistance aids to improve, progress and strenghen their knowledge.

Thirdly, the homeworks help to students not to waste for useless activities such as playing games, using internetand going out with friends. For instance, if the students have free time they will try to do something not to be boring the whole day.

To sum up, giving the homework is the best way to progress the student's knowledge and it helps to do some activities to recollect, practise and work independently as i mentioned above. However, it helps to achieve their goal and wish in the are of knowledge.

You have lots of spelling mistakes and typos. Go through them with a spell checker ( found in MS Word also).
Your grammar is fine.
I think that the examples that you used have awkward phrasing (especially the first one).
Lastly, your points are not well elaborated. What is the word limit? A decent essay should at least have 5-6 sentences dedicated to a certain point.
Hope this helps :)
Jan 15, 2012, 08:43am   #3
Yes an essay is long and is explained in greater detail.
I have corrected some of the spelling errors that you have made and changed a few sentence(highlighted in red):

There are various reasons for assigning homework to students. Each teacher has their own method, some people think that setting homework is important but others think the opposite. From my point of view it is neccessary in a students education. The reason is that it gives them the opportunity to work independently and not waste thier time on useless activities. In this essay I will explain the reason of the importance of homework within a student's life.

Generally, i think that homework is the best way to improve in a subject outside of school. The teachers always try to give their knowledge to students. However, the teachers would check thier student's progress with the help of homework. For example, when a student does not do thier homework, maybe some important part of the lesson was forgotten meaning not to practise, reread the lesson and the homework, it will be easier to recollect a lesson. This way the teacher would know where thier weak points(or weaknesses) are within that subject. The student would then be able to make progress in the lesson with the help of advice from thier teacher.

Secondly, the teachers give homework to students that work and do the assignment independently
without help of anyone. Furthemore, doing without the assistance of aids to improve, progress and strengthen their knowledge.

Thirdly, the homework tasks help the students not to waste valuable time on useless activities , like playing games and going out with friends. But ofcourse no one forbids them from doing these activies as the student do need some entertainment in ther lives. For instance, if the students have free time they will try to do something that may help them in thier future.

To sum up, giving the homework is the best way to progress the student's knowledge and it helps to do some activities to recollect, practise and work independently as i mentioned in my essay. However, it helps to achieve their goal and they will have a successful future.

Hope my corrections helped. Please read and give me feedback on my task (below)
Jan 15, 2012, 01:32pm   #4
There are various ideas about assigning homeworks to student. Each teacher has its own methods. Some people think that the homework is important but others think opposite side of it. From my point of view, it is necessary in student's life. The reason is that it helps to practice, work independently and not to waste for useless activities. In this essay I will explain the reason of importance of homework in the student's life.
Generally, I think the homework is the best way to practice the lesson which a teacher taught students at school. The teachers always try to give their knowledge to the students. However, the teachers would check how their students realize the lesson with the help of homework. For example, when a student does not do the homeworks, may be some important part of lesson was forgotten owing to not to practise, reread the lesson and do homeworks, it will be easier to recollect a lesson.
Jan 15, 2012, 04:04pm   #5
Abed, I hope you don't mind me correcting you but a teacher is not an animal or thing, therefore I think you should prevent called them it-"each teacher has it's own methods"
I might be wrong but that is just my opinion
Jan 24, 2012, 11:17am   #8
Yes you right I speak as you i suppose It is my second language i use it everyday and Alina is more Russian girls name and beautiful name too but your surname is a bit different
Jan 24, 2012, 12:42pm   #9
Expand on your ideas and give specific examples. Besides the spelling and grammer mistakes, your essay definetly has potential. The word "however" is used a bit too much in the essay, try expanding your vocabulary.
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