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Mahatma Gandhi, is the most important spiritual guide in contemporary world; important world leader


maryailt 4 / 10 1  
Oct 4, 2014   #1
There are many important leaders who have made changes in people's life all over the world but in my view the preeminent leader of Indian independence movement in British-ruled India, Mahatma Gandhi, is the most important spiritual guide in contemporary world.

Most of us know him and certainly have heard about his role in the history of India but how much information do we have about his personality? Gandhi not only led India to independence and inspired movements for civil right and freedom but also has several specific characters which make him different from other leaders.

The most important character of him is that he was the first people who propound the principle of non-violence and tried to develop this concept in the world. Truth is another aspect of Gandhi. He devoted his life to the wider purpose of discovering truth and honesty. He tried to achieve this by learning from his own mistakes. The other point that should be mentioned is his popularity among Indian because of his simple life. He strongly believed that a real leader whose goal is helping to the people, should be a modest and humble man.

Because of these and many other factors Mahatma Gandhi was a great leader who could change India to a unified, powerful and effective country in the world.
OP maryailt 4 / 10 1  
Oct 4, 2014   #2
It is fir TOEFL test. independent writing part.
vangiespen - / 4,134 1449  
Oct 4, 2014   #3
Mary, it is important that you first introduce your reader to Mahatma Gandhi because not everyone is familiar with him and his work during the move of India to gain independence from Britain. You must ease the reader into this essay by giving an overview of how he is viewed historically and also, you need to give concrete examples of Gandhi's work that you feel adequately promotes him as an important world leader. You can do this by explaining how he developed his idea about non-violent protests and its effectiveness in the cause of India's moves towards independence.

Remember that in order to prove his importance during this notable period of India's history, you also need to present the side that he fought against. Describe how he overcame adversity and political pressure in order to help India emerge victorious. By presenting all of the facts relating to the life and times of Mahatma Ghandi, you will be able to successfully defend why you choice him to be the focal point of your essay.
OP maryailt 4 / 10 1  
Oct 4, 2014   #4
good advise thank you very much


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