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Long period of studying will make students feel bored and limit their self-study


wulishiyanzl 1 / 2  
Jul 7, 2014   #1
If going to class more than 11 months in one year, whether the students will get more effective education?

Some people are convinced that if going to class more than 11 months in one year ,the students will get more effective education, which I have a different idea on. Since long period of studying will make students feel bored , limit their self-study and research time, and prevent them from relax and refresh themselves, I believe that the policy will just act the adverse effect .

First and foremost, during such long period of time ,it is more than possible that students will lose enthusiasm in what they are learning thus making the education less effective . Take myself as an example, with no interruption ,I used to spend nearly 1 year studying Japanese. However, the longer I worked on it , the less attractive it seemed to me, at last I kind of regretted my decision to study a second language. To my surprise, after one month or two's break, I found that Japanese still appealed to me . I just needed some time to get access to something new and involved more interesting things ,rather than Japannse alone ,in my life.

Second, effective education involves more than lectures and homework. Self-study and research are also required to make a student effectively educated. Considering the length of 11 months , I am convinced that students will have no spare time to focus on what they are curious about and do a research on it by themselves. No doubt that it will erode the study effect.

Third, buried themselves in books and exercises for almost one year, students will not get much time left to relax and refresh themselves, as a result of which, efficiency decrease awaits. It is common sense that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. If students can't refresh themselves , how can they be in the perfect situation to absorb knowledge? Endless study only ensure students to be weird and stressed not energetic and refreshing. On the contrary ,I always find myself with a clear mind after I go traveling one or two days before I get started to do my project.

In a nutshell, 11 months' study will do no good to a more effective study. Students need a balanced life between study and relax in that it helps maintain their interests in the particular subject, ensures enough time to self learning and better prepare them for studying.
Nece 2 / 4  
Jul 8, 2014   #2
If going to class more than 11 months in one year, whether the students will get more effective education?

Some people are convinced that ifgoing to class more than 11 months in onea year ,the students will getwill make the students more effective in their education, which i have a different idea on However, this is not what i believed in . SinceI do believe that long period of studying will make students feel bored , this will also limit their self-study and research time, and prevent them from relaxing and refreshing themselves, I believe that the policy will just act the adverse effect .
First and foremost, during such long period of time ,it is more than possible that studentsLong period of studying will onyl make the students lose enthusiasm in what they are learning thus making the education less effective . Taking myself as an example, with no interruption ,I used to spend nearlyalmost 1 year studying Japanese language . However, the longer I worked on it , the less attractive it seemed to me, and at last I kind of regretted my decision to study a second language. To my surprise, after one month or two months break, I found that Japanese language is still appealing to me . I just needed some time to get access to something new and involved more interesting things ,rather than Japannse alone ,in my life. And maybe what I had experienced is the thing called "burn out"
Second, effective education involves more than lectures and homework. Self-study and research are also required to make a student effectively educated. Considering the length of 11 months , I am convinced that students will have no spare time to focus on what they are curious about and do a research on itby themselves. No doubt that it will erode the study effect. the effects of the study.
Third, buriedburying themselves in books and exercises for almost one year, students will not get much time left to relax and refresh themselves, as a result of which, efficiency decrease awaits. It is common sense that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. If students can't refresh themselves , how can they be in the perfect situation to absorb knowledge? Endless study only ensure students to be weird and stressed not energetic and refreshing. On the contrary ,I always find myself with a clear mind after I go traveling one or two days before I get started to do my project.
In a nutshell, 11 months' study
months of studying will do no good to a more effective study. Students need a balanced life betweenof study and relaxationin that It helps maintain their interests in the particular subject, ensures enough time to self learning and better prepare them for studying.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Jul 22, 2014   #4
Well, it is good for us to know the purpose of writing this essay, e.g. IELTS or TOEFL (include the purpose in your title) and also the full prompt (you can include it in the same post). They help us understand your prompt better and provide you with more task related feedbacks.

Some people are convinced that if going to class more than 11 months in one year ,the students will get more effective education, which I have a different idea on.

In my view, this sentence is too long be an interesting hook that can grab the reader's attention as you open your essay. Write a shorter, clearer and more interesting sentence to start your essay.
OP wulishiyanzl 1 / 2  
Jul 22, 2014   #5
Thank you very much,I will try.


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