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Living in country or city? Answer depends on the ages, hobbies and gender of each person.


sara waled 2 / 2 1  
Sep 15, 2014   #1
I think the answer for this question depends on the ages , hobbies , and gender of each person . in my opinion I prefer city for different reasons . in the city there are many schools and the students will have better education in addiction , people will have more job opportunity moreover , the city has more recreation facilities that people can visit and have fun time such as shopping centers , clubs , movie theaters , parks , restaurants , and markets furthermore, the city has lots of transportation that people can use like cars , buses , airplanes , and trains also , city has different service that helps people includes hospital and library .and if you look for any kind of foods , drugs you can buy it from there .In the other hands of course country has an advantage than city for example , the air in the country is cleaner than the city in addiction of having a more natural place that people can visit and have a more enjoyable time . citizen in the country has an opportunity of having an organic food because they can plant any kind of foods they want such as seeds , nuts , fruit , vegetables . in short I think the city is best for me .

can you check my spelling and grammer
nickyzhi 8 / 21 8  
Sep 15, 2014   #2
1. in the title, it's which not what
2. for every period or comma, you should write it behind the word without blank, eg: you, and me. not you , and me .
3. in addiction is in addition
4. think the city is best for me .
you'd better use better, not best
fikri 5 / 317 71  
Sep 15, 2014   #3
I think the answer for this question depends on the ages , hobbies , and gender of each person. In my opinion, I prefer city for different reasons. In the city, there are many schools and the students will have better education. In addition, people will have more job opportunities. Moreover, the city has more recreation facilities that people can visit and have fun time such as shopping centers, clubs, movie theaters, parks, restaurants, and markets. Furthermore, the city has lots of transportation that people can use like cars, buses, airplanes, and trains. Also, city has different services that helps people includes hospital and library. If you look for any kind of foods, drugs you can buy it from there. On the other hand, of course country has an advantage than city. For example, the air in the country is cleaner than the city. In addition of having a more natural place that people can visit and have a more enjoyable time, citizens in the country have an opportunity of having an organic food because they can plant any kind of foods they want such as seeds, nuts, fruit, and vegetables. In short, I think the city is the best for me.


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