As far as I concerned that people always want to achieve their goals, but they always have to miss many things, which will be unreachable any longer.
I know you changed the essay, but I still want to quote the sentence above because I like it so much. The sentence has mistakes, but it still might be the most important sentence you typed. This sentence expresses an idea that is extremely important, and it is one that people may not always consider: everybody is so busy trying to achieve their goals, but while they were to achieve their goals they are missing experiences that they may never have the opportunity to experience again. In fact, I don't think I have ever thought about goal achievement quite like this. Your sentence, even though it had grammar errors, made me reconsider the things I'm doing today! I am working toward my goals, but are my goals still worth missing the opportunity to experience whatever is waiting for me outside my door right now?
Anyway, in the future remember to type: As far as I
am concerned...
About the grammar: Pay attention to 'number agreement'
Example:
To reach their goal, they miss their family or may put their life in danger.
Some migrate to other part of
Some of these jobs need to take a risk and as a result, they even lose their life.
Pluralize these words: goals, families, lives...Use the word require:
Some of these jobs require people to take
a risks, and as a result, they even lose their lives.
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