Unanswered [10] / Urgent [0]
 

Home / Writing Feedback /     

Personal life of famous person is no longer "personal"


answers: 6
Sep 23, 2009, 02:31pm   #1
Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
------------------------------------------------------------ --------------------

With the remarkable development of public media, the personal life of famous person is no longer "personal". Personally, I cannot agree more with that today's television, newspaper, magazines and other media pay too much attention to them.

Every day, there are plenty of journalists waiting outside of the homes of famous people. They take photos about the things they do and the people they meet. If there is something strange happened, the tomorrow's title page will appear the news of this person. Sometimes it is absurd and annoying, and to certain extent, has disturbed the normal life of those people, or even been harmful to them. The typical example is Princess Dianna, who is died in a traffic accident. After she had dinner with her boyfriend, the couple found there was a journalist who wanted to take photos with them. Wanting to get rid of him, the couple drove faster and faster so that they didn't notice another car coming to them. This situation also happened in other countries, many Korea TV stars have suicide themselves because of the highly concerned by the public, which also occurred in China. This situation has showed that public should give these persons a room to relax and work.

Another situation often happened to these super stars is that the news from them is always not about their works. It is more likely that public is now interested in their relationship with other people, instead of their hard work. When you read the newspapers, the most news appeared in them are like one has broken up with his lover, the couple of star C and D want to divorce, or even star E enter the relationship between F and G, etc.. However, as far as I am concerned, it is the private part of people's lives, nobody should tell other ones about their private life, even though they are famous.

To sum up, because of the too much attention paid by public media, famous people cannot live normally, which should be stopped.

Sep 23, 2009, 05:10pm   #3
Relationship between the parents and the children is very unique. all parents desire that his son or daughter have the good quality. good qualities are very essential to spend a successful life in the future. therefore, the most important quality that parents are expected from their son or daughter are, respect, success in life and take care of the parents.


first of all, one of the prerequisite quality that a good son or daughter have to be respect their parents and other elderly people.parents are the people who we should pay the most respect and gratefulness. they brought us to this world and taught the distinguish between good and bad manners. they look after us and sacrifice the whole life for our better future.In return they expect nothing from us. Therefore, a good son or daughter must be respect their parents because respectful children not only liked by parents but they also consider a great person in the society.

Secondly, all parents have dream that their children have successful social life. parents want that their kids have good name in the society and high education but most of the children do not like to attend college or university.they want to enjoy their time and later regrets. Consequently, a good son or daughter should be fulfill their parents dream to have a comfortable life.

The Most important quality for a good son or daughter are that they should take care of their parents when they become older and need help.For example, in most well developed countries the teenagers want their own apartment or stay with friends. it increase the distance between the parents and the children. when the parents become older the children do not want stay with their parents and put them in a nursery home. the children do not have time to take care of their parents.As a result, being a good son or daughter we should look after our parents when they need associates.

in the end, all parents want that their kids have the top qualities.they want a respectful, successful and take caring children. we should try our best to make our parents happy.
Sep 23, 2009, 07:20pm   #4
the personal life of famous person is no longer "personal".

Sounds awkward. Use "famous people" or "personal lives of famous people"


Personally, I cannot agree more with that today's television


Try something like: "agree more with this in that today's television". Again it sounds awkward.

If there is something strange happened

Change it to: "If there is something strange that has happened"

tomorrow's


Change to: "next day's title page"

and to certain extent


change to: "and to a certain extent"

has disturbed the normal life of those people


More specific, who are "those people"?

who is died

Change to: "who has died". Tense is incorrect

I am short in time right now so that is all I can do.

Hope I helped = )
Sep 24, 2009, 07:11am   #5
CantWrite
really thank for your help~~~~

because I want to finish it within 30 mins, so I have not so much time to think about or even wirte a draft.
Sep 27, 2009, 10:27am   #6
The Most important quality for a good son or daughter areis that they should take care of their parents when they become older and need help.
Sep 27, 2009, 01:30pm   #7
With the remarkable development of public media, the personal life of famous person is no longer "personal". Personally, I do not agree with the statement thay today's television, newspaper, magazines and other media pay too much attention to them.



Home / Writing Feedback /

Thread closed ✓