I tend to agree with the speaker's assertion that laws should be flexible enough to take into account the circumstances, times and places.
At the end of the first paragraph, do not JUST state your position. Instead, it is a good idea to use the word BECAUSE.
I tend to agree with the speaker's assertion that laws should be flexible enough to take into account the circumstances, times and places, because _________________________. (give a few words to show your reason/theme).
We have to take into account the issue of subjectivity, each person would harbor a different understanding of the law and the ruling might differ.
Great sentence construction, and great points! I am impressed.
This law, as outrageous as it might appear to be, at least seems apt in a state inhab
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I don't know... the structure seems great. You have a good paragraph topic sentence to begin each paragraph, and each paragraph has a main idea that supports the main idea of the essay. That is good structure.