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According to the
policy of IT College in the UAEU, I have to have my own laptop. Here, I am going to write some information about my first laptop.
My laptop is a
Dell XPS M 1210. I loved my laptop when I first
saw it. It is a very small and portable laptop. The monitor is
12.1 inches. The most important thing in any laptop is the memory; my laptop has 70 GB
of RAM. On the
other hand, my laptop has many other features that no other laptop has, such as a large and movable
web camera, and independent microphone inside so I do not need to add any outer microphone. In addition, there is a special icon called Media Direct; this is a software installed to do media stuff. For example, playing movies, songs and viewing photos.
I really love my small laptop with its
black lid and silver keyboard. I am using it for
my studying at
university and for
practicing my favorite hobby, which is writing short stories and novels. Recently, I started a small project using some programs like Movie
Maker, Adobe Photoshop, Blue J and E-clips. Starting my small business project makes me depend on my laptop very much. Furthermore, having a wireless device on my laptop helps me
communicate with others easily. To this end, I am using my laptop more than 10 hours daily. Finally, I would like to say, friends are not necessarily persons only
, they can
be animals or things, too;
that's why my laptop is my best and closest
friend-- I love it so much.