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knowledge consolidating; Teachers should assign homework for students every day


Allen Hu 8 / 26 4  
Sep 18, 2013   #1
Please give me some advices~I appreciate your help~~

In most of schools of my country, teachers regularly assign homework to their students everyday. Some people may rebutes this since daily homework is a huge burden of students. However, as far as I am concerned, students should do their homework everyday for consolidating their knowledge system, developing a great study habit and for their success in the exams

First of all, the best way to reinforce student's knowledge system is to do homework everyday. Obviously, human brains are not computers, they are not capable of remembering every details taught in classes. But if one student does his homework everyday, accordingly he could review the knowledge points automatically, causing him not neglect these important details. And meanwhile, doing homework everyday could lead students to develop a great study habit, which is useful for students' future life. A great study habit is able to assist students in studying new knowledge more efficiently and accurtely. As we all know, when students step into the real society, they would become a broad range of professional man, such as doctors, teachers, writers or business leaders. Thus it is essential for them to master the professional knowledge in their own fields. If they have developed a great study habit in their early study stage, they can learn new skills more easily and therefore get a promotion more quickly.

In addition, doing homework is crucial for success in exams, especially for those students who are not bright enough. As one of Bryan Tracy books said: "Success comprises of 21 parts." and hard-working is the most important part of them. As for me, I am not a very talented guy in my high school, but I stick to what my teacher said and do my homework everyday for getting a great score in exam. Finally I made it, I passed the College Entrance Examination with a high score and entered my dream university. Meanwhile, for those who are talented in study, if they are not hard-working and not doing their homework everyday, they would have no chance to present their talents, fail the exams and end up no where.

Admittedly, it is also important for students to exercise everyday, to enjoy the beauty of nature and to appreciate the arts. Doing homework should not be the only thing that a student would do in one day. In conclusion, as long as students split their time reasonably, they could do their homework efficiently and meanwhile enjoy their spare time, which experience would benefit students a lot.
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Sep 18, 2013   #2
In most of schoolsof my country , teachers regularly assign homework to their students everyday.

.... Better you keep it more general because your prompt doesn't particularly refer to your country.

Some people may rebutesrefute this idea since daily homework is a huge burden ofon students.

Some people perceive this as trend as a major burden on students that create lots of study pressure on them.

However, as far as I am concerned, students should do their homework everyday for consolidating their knowledge system, developing a great study habit and for their success in the exams

However, as far as I am concerned, I believe that homework helps students recap the lessons that they learned in classrooms. It also helps them be more organized in studying that would enable them to perform well at the examinations.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Sep 19, 2013   #3
First of all, the best way to reinforce student's knowledge system is to do homework everyday.

... this sentence does not convey a clear idea.... do you mean that homework gets the student to polish his knowledge? In my view, homework helps student to be more responsible and committed towards schoolwork. Also, it helps him prepare for tests by making him a more organized person as Pahan suggests above.
OP Allen Hu 8 / 26 4  
Sep 20, 2013   #4
@Kalyn17992 I see~ Sure I should use the past tense in my sentence, Thank you for reminding me of that~
@Pahan Thank you for the revision~ your writing skills are brilliant~learn a lot from u~
@dumi what I mean in this sentense is that , students are able to reinforce their knowlege system by doing homework everyday~My sentence seems not be comfused. Why is it confused? Please enlighten me~

Thank you all guys~
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Sep 20, 2013   #5
Why is it confused? Please enlighten me~

well... may be the vocabulary that confused me ... "knowledge system" does not refer to anything straight. It does not really give the idea that homework helps students memorize things easily or it gets them to conceive the concepts better etc.... That is what I tried to mean by my comment. You write well and also show a great commitment to writing and potential for improvement. I suggest you to pay more attention to your essay structure.


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