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It is well known the government is an institution that should represent and support it's people interests, benefits and rights
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Currently, whether the government should shoulder full responsibility to pay for the peoples medical health expenditures has sparked a hot debate.
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there is an ongoing debate as to whether the government should take full responsibility for paying the medical health expenses of its citizens.There are many strong reasons that can compel one to espousal of the statement
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There are many strong reasons to support this public sentiment.-
The reasons people usually want the government to support their health expenses boils down to poverty, a limited income ,
andlack of insurance, by this time microbes are spread out everywhere which is a big thread for any country.
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Avoid using sentences that do not help inform the reader. This sentence also deviates from the essay prompt as this refers to disease research.-
In the rural areas, medical services can only be provided by the government due to small population counts that do not entice big medical companies to come in and build hospitals. Government intervention in that area will also prevent the private health clinics from gouging their patients in terms of charges.-
Though there are benefits to having a wholly subsidized healthcare system, I believe that having the government shoulder all the medical expenses for the public also has its drawbacks. First of all, the public will no longer feel responsible for their health or leading a healthy lifestyle because they don't have medical expenses to worry about.Moreover it will inspire individual irrespective behavior; it might be very difficult to convince a patient to change unhealthy behaviors which associate with the serious health problem such as smoking. Under this circumstance, the patients' health and outcome of medical care will be compromised
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Patients may also suffer from misdiagnosis more often because of the full healthcare subsidy because the doctors will want to just keep charging the patient for as long as the patient has an existing medical subsidy allowance. This would deplete government funding and cause a literal health care crisis for the citizens of the country.-
That is why I believe that having the government shoulder all health expenses for the public will only bring negative results. The health of the public is an individual responsibility. Therefore, each person must be responsible for his or her own healthcare. The Government should only subsidize a portion of healthcare using public taxes. Totally shouldering the expenses only in special cases such as indigent patients and aged people.I hope you won't mind that I rewrote, deleted, and edited your sentences. I did that just to show you how you could made a stronger statement using certain sentence structures and keywords. I hope that my advice can help you out :-)