Jobs for teenagers is
/are one of the most discussed topics
in our society. s
/Some agree that teenagers should work, earn their own money and do study while others think that they should not work rather they they should only concentrate in thier studies. But I highly apperciate
/appreciate the point that teenagers should work and earn their own expence
Teenage is a phase of life when most of us are not fully matured and responsible. When a teenager get into a job he learns the basic traits of life and is forced to become responsible.When a teenager sponser
/sponsor himself for his own studies he knows the value of money and become more foccused
/focused towards his studies.He manages his time very effectively for job as well as studies.He gets his own identity and is no more dependent on his parents instead he can share some responsibilities of his parents. Above all he is so much engaged in this life that he spends his time very calculatively and constructively.
Where as other aspect of working teenager which our society fears that they will be distracted by money and will loose focuss
/focus in their studies.They will be tempted to spend money in many other acitivities which is not accepted by our society and some also fears that their performance in studies will degrade if they work. But all these are only the fear of our mind. If we guide our teenagers in every step of their life , motivate them and make them understand clearly every aspect of life,
then I think our teenagers will make us proud in
/of all their endeaveours
Therefore, I strongly vote that all teenager should work and make their individual identity very early in life and make their parents feel proud for
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