especially words and sentences.
that covers just about everything!
Hey, this correction needs one more change to be perfect:
Young people have varieties plans about their long term careers.
I'll make a small change:
Young people have varieties of plans about their long term careers.
Hey, you do not have many errors. Soon, you will be able to write with no errors, as long as you work to find the errors you still have. Find the changes I make below and see if you can discern the error that I corrected. Practice typing each of these 10 times the correct way:
People who have only one job find that their lives are narrowed down to the single field composed by coworkers, bosses, and customers. --- your way was not wrong, just awkward.
For example, an advertiser who used to work in a newspaper office has more chances to get a vacant on newspaper.-- I don't know how to correct this one! What do you mean?
They rarely take their own interest into account.
For example, by trying different jobs, a music enthusiast may find s/he prefers to be a street performer, which brings him or her sense of success that could not be achieved as a music teacher.
The argument can be answered with
reference to meaningful skills, increased experience, and interest.