every aspect
every aspect / all aspects
The twentieth century has seen a
lot ofmany great changes taken place in every
aspectsaspect of life.
This causes both travelling
difficultydifficulties and
enviromentalenvironmental damage
s.Your approach for the first two essays looks alright. However, in the third one, you do not introduce the background of the issue adequately. Before expressing your own opinion on the issue, introduce the issue to the reader.
I find you write extremely well. Move into the other parts of the essay - body paras and the conclusion