Internet converted the world exactly into a
village. Now, one living in Japan is quite at written, verbal and even visual communication with the other one living in Denmark. Another hallmark of internet is that it gives free access to a number of educational journals, books, general information
and current affairs. Countless development in the field of trade and business is also one of the miracles of internet. More over,
it minimizes the chances of cultural clash by providing knowledge of each culture.
Along with this
, we can not ignore the way
internet is exploiting the youth. It is refraining youth from being in touch with libraries and diminishing the book reading habit among students and scholars. It thus makes the
m through and through dependent upon technology. Further more a number of useless sites providing chit chat and low quality videos, which not only wastes youth's precious time but also demolishes moralities. Freedom of expression allows any one to write any thing about any one in any way. It causes chaos when one speaks bad against other's good.
To all intents and purposes, a gun itself never shoots
an innocent but it is the hunter who shoots
. A knife can cut both the vegetable and the neck. The
same goes for internet. So it is up to whoever uses it
whether to make internet a blessing or a bane.
Those are all the mistakes that I could find.
This is a good essay overall, but I suggest you do more proofreading.
Good Luck ! =)