However, I strongly disagree with the statment because I believe that people become more aggressive and hateful towards other citizens of diffierent countries.
Above, there are 2 spelling errors, so be sure to run this through a spell checker. Also, in the above sentence, you should be clear: ...strongly disagree with this statement, because I believe that
during international sporting events people become...
So, I think it is not a good way to express emotions.
to for expressingI would not call a unsuccessful sports performance a "serious" cause of depression.
My friend, I tend to agree with you! I hope you use a spell checker, and also try to explain your paragraphs a little more -- with a topic sentence, supporting sentences, and a conclusion for each paragraph.
Good luck!!!
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