I have tried to find an opened thread but, since I have not found any, I opened a new one.
I am glad you started a new thread. Every time you write an essay, start a new thread.
I see 2 places where you used a comma instead of a period:
1,98% and It it is the last. Ireland has 2,21%
It should be 1.98% and 2.21%
Can you add a sentence to tell about what the %% stuff refers to? I wonder if Italy accounts for 9% of the clothing bought by the countries named here or if it refers to 9% of consumption in Europe, or if the 9% refers to something else. Do you know what I mean?
I think you did a great job here! That is my only question... 9% of what? Total consumption of that particular item in the countries represented in the chart?