Each person has their own characteristics in their lives. As such, born-characteristics in people, as per some experts, influence people's personality more than their experiences. However, I personally argue that people who have any experiences are more influenced for people's personality because people can achieve some information by surrounding they live in.
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Research indicates that the characteristic we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Everybody is unique by personality. The supporters of this argue that personality influences experiences that lead occupational success. Yet, I would claim that experiences are more important since they shape people's characteristics.Overall, it is well-done. Make sure that you write this into 40 minutes. If you could, then I think this is good news :D
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