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Which is more important family or friends?


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Apr 4, 2011, 11:30pm   #
It seem that a comparison between family and friend is probably inappropriate. Each of these plays a different role in our life.
Family is a inseparable part of our life. Family is the inception of our existence. Our home is where we were born , and our parents , granting the first breath to us , were also the first teachers who teach us about simplest things such as wearing clothes and so on . Thanks to our parents, a vast mount of experiences, making us understand life better and become more confident in the future, have been transmitted to us. To some extent, family ties are unbreakable and exist forever. For example, even we were adapted children, we couldn't stop seeking our real parents who have never looked after us at all.
Friend , on the other hand, share school life, emotion and secrets with us. As tutor, our friends assist us in learning difficult subjects and teach us how to learn in a more effective way. Moreover, sharing our emotion and secret, which can make us inhibited when telling our parents about it, with them tends to a effective way to reduce the pressure on us.

I do not think that it would be true to compare both family and friends. Our parents are those people who teach us to discriminate between white and black, good and bad and other things. They built our foundation which helps us in our further future. Speaking about friends, it should be mentioned that the friendship between our friends never lasts up to our lives. When we lose our friends, we meet new ones. They also impact on us, but I think that a person should put his or her parents first, and then friends.

It is my point of view. Thanks.
Marsha2809:
Family is the inception of our existence.

Wow, very nice...

or example, even we were adapted children, we couldn't adopted children cannot stop seeking their real parents who have never looked after us at all.

Friend , on the other hand, share school life, emotions and secrets with us. As tutors, our friends assist us in learning difficult...

Moreover, sharing our emotion and secrets can make us inhibited when telling our parents about it, but with them tends to serve as a effective way to reduce the pressure on us.

:-) I like your ideas!!!!!!!!!



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