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'my ideal image' a person you admire, and say why you admire hime/her


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Hi. please tell me about this essay with 100 words and in one paragraph whith the topic :Describe a person you admire, and say why you admire hime/her .
The person I idolize is neighter a big celebrity nor a multiminaire , even not a specific person. Who is a person as my ideal image. One reason I admire him /her because of his/ her honesty even thogh it causes bothersfor him/her self or others. He/she is always happy and optimistic about the future and situation, and belives on whatever happen to aman is equal to a man, aman is equal to all his challenges in life. In the end I would like to say the person I can admire, shows people how to love, how to live and could teach how to be a better person.

farnoosh gh

Oct 19, 2011, 09:01am   #
The person I idolize is neitherneighter a big celebrity nor ,a multiminaire , oreven not a specific person. Who is a person as my ideal image. One reason I admire him /her because of his/ her honesty even thogh it causes bothersfor him/her self or others. He/she is always happy and optimistic about the future and situation, and belives on whatever happen to aman is equal to a man, aman is equal to all his challenges in life. In the end I would like to say the person I can admire, shows people how to love, how to live and could teach how to be a better person.

I just think that you need to actually pick someone before you can try to work on this essay.



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