Success is conditional aspect for human beings in the horizon .
Every person has dreams of success in his/her career.
the dominant factor being success
a dominant factor of success
I strongly believe that hard WORK and assert ourselves using our mind and imagination completed by great talented enable us to shape the world of our desires.
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As an obvious example, a senior editor at Fortune magazine Geoffrey Colvin shows that Tiger Woods as the youngest-ever winner of golf in the U.S. He enable to play golf because his father introduced him to golf at an extremely early age - 18 months - and encouraged him to practice intensively, Woods had racked up at least 15 years of practice.
for what purpose do you quote this short passage from Colvin? I did not see this passage form a line with the topic. In the end of the sentence, your should conclude what you have presented as to recall your point(s).
Talent is how skills, intelligent, and knowledge are used.
Try not write a topic retrieved from a definition or a quotation, commonly known as general ideas.