There is one opinion which supports that governments should spend more money on improving roads, on the other hand another opinion is governments should spend more money on improving public transportationlike trains and busesAs far as I am concerned I would like to choose the second opinion which says that government should spend more money in order to improving public transport. My reasons to hold this view are as follows.
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First, Improving in public transportation helps us to save the world from global warming. Everyone knows that the global warming is harmful for our beautiful world and personal vehicles cause that, because every vehicle emits carbondioxide which is the main reason for global warming. Just imagine that world's population is more thann 70 billion, so if most of the population choose to buy personal vehicles due to lack of public transportation, it will be dangerous for this world. So if government spends money more on improving public transportation rather than improving roads, it will attract morepeople to travel by public transport rather than their own cars.
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First, Improving in public transportation helps us to save the world from global warming. Everyone knows that the global warming is harmful for our beautiful world and personal vehicles cause that, because every vehicle emits carbondioxide which is the main reason for global warming.
Besides, I think this sentence should be:
First, improving on public transportation helps us to save the world from global warming. Everyone knows that the global warming is harmful to our beautiful world
and personal vehicles cause that, because every vehicle emits carbondioxide, which is the main reason for global warming.