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Since we were youngsters , we were told to wake up every morning and prepare ourselves for school.
At that time, we did it without interest
on the contrary, we did it involuntarily. All
children are likely to say that going to school is an extremely boring duty since they do not really understand the reason why should they study.There are several reasons why people should attend school.
In my opinion, the
first reason is about the need for
knowledge. Mankind has been ruling this world for thousands of years and after the revolution of science in 1760s our technology has been
progressing very quickly. A lot of careers
have been presented to us since then, too,
and the man who can apply for the occupation must have enough knowledge in order to suit the job
to do. So young people need to go to school before they turn themselves into a working man or woman. If they do not study in high school or university, their chances of getting a job will certainly vanish. Knowledge
is a must for every career.
they are also able to inculcate in children norms and patterns of living in society.
This shows that schools play a remarkably important role in making children successful adults.
While children are studying in schools involuntarily, some
adults decide to go to school arbitrarily. [If it is something they have always wanted to do, it is not really arbitrary.]
Grownups who make up their minds
to study interesting
subjects in school are usually determined and dreamy [Not sure what you meant by "dreamy" but it is not the right word here.]
since they want to study something which they formerly wanted to but they could not accomplish at that time.
For example, a lawyer longing to be a dancer since
he was a child may go to the dancing school every other evening after working hard all day. These people are ,in my view, admirable due to their intention
to learn what they have been desiring for decades.Children
are not told to go to school just because
they are kids, but because going to school will help them shoulder the responsibilities of adulthood.
Knowledge and societal awareness is necessary for all of us. We would not have come this far if we had not transferred knowledge and useful data from generation to generation. Consequently, school is the place where our civilization begins.
Best of luck in your studies!