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'globalization risk' - visitors to a country follow local customs and behavior?


With the development of technology, people travel the world easily in the modern society. As long as you have mass of money, you can trip the universe. It is amazing. But in the meantime, whether tourists should follow local customs and behaviour has become a focus issue. Someone believe that visitors should follow local customs and behaviour while others argue that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Before presenting my viewpoint, I will discuss both sides of the argument. However, as far as I concerned, I am favour of former.
As the idiom said :"While in Rome, do as the Remans do." the reason why every travellers visit different countries is that they are attractive with brilliant history and mysterious cultures. Just for this simple and important reason, people start to discover the new continent in their hearts. We can know the culture of country through tripping. For example, we can stay with the local family, talk about anything about their country and join some special activities with local people. If we do that, It means that we have adapt to their life. This way is the best to protect the host country culture. Because of the rise of globalization, many countries have begun to lose themselves.
On the other hand, colorable argument can be made that the host country should welcome cultural differences. They want to earn more money from this, so they meet people's any needs. Sometimes,that the different cultures are introduced into the host country is the good thing. It can be seen as human evolution, but it affects that the country have a short history like U.S.A, Canada and so on. The globalization will damage the language and customs.
In summary, I agree that people should follow local customs and behaviour. And we can't lose the sight of risks of globalization. It is significant for the government to make efforts to conserve endangered culture.
Jun 1, 2015   #2
- As long as you have mass amountof money, you can have atrip tothe universe.

- However, as far as II'm concerned, I am infavour of theformer.

- As the idiom said :"While in Rome, do as the RemansRomans do." the reason why every travellerstravelers visit different countries is that they are attractiveattracted with brilliant history and mysterious cultures.

- This way is the best wayto protect the host country's culture.

- Because of the rise of globalization, many countries have begun to lose themselves( I suppose you mean, their cultural heritage").

- On the other hand, colorable( do you mean, "collaborated") argument can be made that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

Cherry, your essay is good. I'm just not sure if you were able to fulfill the goal of the essay to write about globalization risk.
You can have it elaborated more and share more of your ideas about cultural exchange or culture preservation, furthermore, you can site examples of countries that has improved in economic perspective with the help of tourism.

Keep writing

Cheers!!!
With the development of technology, people travel the world easily in the modern society. As long as (...)
(...) of the argument. However, as far as I concerned, I am favour of former.

Here, I would like to suggest possible ideas for your essay.
Tourists play an important role in tourism industry. As such, more and more countries try to attract plenty of people's interest from different countries for coming. For some individuals, travelers should follow what is local culture and costume in places where they visit to obtain welcoming from the local people. Whilst it is reasonable to some extent, I tend to think that visitors actually do not need to follow the custom of the areas visited as long as they can respect and do not influence the inhabitants so much. Hope this helps
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