This sentence is awkward:
In this world, there is no one who does not know this world 'globalization', which means the world are more closer, and every single countries affects each other more than before in many ways.
I want to make it simpler:
In this world, there is no one who does not know the word 'globalization' means: the people of the world seem closer to one another, and every single country affects the others more than before in many ways.
Now it is better.
To be out of poverty, it is fundamental to support basic industry related factors such as light, electricity, load, highways, natural resources, technology and buildings for companies.
This is a very impressive sentence! I can tell that you are a master of language, someone who is a "verbal thinker," so please practice your verbs by reading good articles aloud and pratcicing different kinds of sentences. You are doing well!
Verb tense: Now that it has become strong economy country aiding poor countries after 10 years of aid from other counties. --- can you find the very small change I made to this sentence?
Also, practice with singular and plural:
You have to say, "Every single country..." or "All countries" but not "
Every single countries "
In conclusion, there are above-mentioned three key points of positive effects of aid: supporting poor countries to make their economy strong, building humane concepts in people's minds, and cultivating a strong global economy.
I strongly believe that being a global neighbor by aiding poor countries should be continued by many organizations and volunteers, and it will make the earth a better place to live.
Here is your homework assignment: practice reading each of those sentences I corrected, and read them ALOUD. Also, practice typing them the correct way each time you speak them. Practice each of them
10 times, and your English will improve today! :-) I am excited about your potential.