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Give reasons and make suggestions. unemployment problem , reasons and solutions.


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Feb 18, 2010, 02:08am   #
In many countries, more and more young people are leaving schools and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and the society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.

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Along with the rapid development of science and technology, nowadays, the labors market has been replaced by industrial production. One of serious issues led by this change is the high young unemployment rate, which in turn result to a series of severe impacts on society and individuals.

First of all, the large number of unemployed youths will lead to an unsteady society. As they are located in the most ...

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Feb 18, 2010, 08:13pm   #
the labor market has been replaced by industrial production
As they are located in the most energetic age, such affairs like driving, drinking, fight, making noise, are easier be done by them. A survey shows that most crimes are committed by adolescences, who are unemployed
It may be a heavy burden for a family to afford too much many people's life. Just try to imagine such a situation that only where there is only one person work working in a family while five persons need to be supply supplaied. If two young couple
In my own view, first the government should try his it's best to broaden the employment approach, for example, developing the tourism, open agricultural product process plants.

Should govt only take steps to eliminate unemployment?Can't the youth try some self employment strategy or open buisness?Try it also
One of serious issues associated with this change is the high young unemployment rate among young people, which in turn results in a series of severe impacts on society and individuals.

It may be a heavy burden for a family to afford to provide for all its members. Just try to imagine such a situation where only one person works in a family while five people need to be supplied with food and other necessities. If a young couple raising children loses their employment, family quarrel seems to be inevitable.

With the further exploration the unemployment problem will be solved, ultimately.

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Feb 19, 2010, 11:10pm   #
Thanks kevin and remya. in fact I do know where to begin when I write this essay. after a discuss with my friend I decide rewriting it . the followin is the rewritten essay.
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Nowadays, along with the rapid development of high-technology, more and more young people face the danger of unemployment, some of them have been closed outsides the doors of workplaces even before they have a chance to step into them.

The influences of this phenomenon both on individuals and on society are extremely far-reaching. In terms of individuals, unemployment means the negative to his/her ability of working. In other words, his/her have not be able to adjust the society demands. This would not only bring serious spirit pressure to individuals, but also probably result in the family quarrels caused by the economic stress. In the aspect of society, unemployment suggests the increasing burden to society and government. A large number of unemployed youth will absolutely consume enormous society resources which will directly lead to the decrease of life quality of the whole social members.

To solve this problem need the joint effort of individuals, society and government. First of all, individuals should try his/her best to adjust himself/herself to adjust the society demands by enriching his/her knowledge and studying new skills. Meanwhile, the society and government should spare no effort to provide create such a condition for individuals, such as holding training classes, open technical schools, according to the society demands. by this way, not only will the individuals unemployment questions be solved successfully, but also the quality of the whole society will get improved enormously.

In conclusion, in my view, unemployment is not a serious question, the serious question should be the attitudes of individuals, society and government to deal with this issue. How will us choose , to give up or to accept challenge? I think the latter undoubtedly is the wise choice.

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This is a run-on sentence:
Nowadays, along with the rapid development of high-technology, more and more young people face the danger of unemployment, some of them have been closed outsides the doors of workplaces even before they have a chance to step into them.--- you can fix it by using a semi-colon:
Nowadays, along with the rapid development of high-technology, more and more young people face the danger of unemployment; some of them have been closed outside the doors of workplaces even before...

by this way, not only ...---- capitalize that first word of the sentence

Through this method, not only will the individuals' unemployment questions be solved answered successfully, but also the quality of the whole society will improve enormously.


:-) you are great! Keep practicing



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