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IELTS General task 1- You have a full time job and also doing a part time evening course.


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Nov 11, 2013, 09:46am   #
You have a full time job and also doing a part time evening course. you now find that you cannot continue the course. write a letter to the course tutor.
In your letter
.describe the situation
.explain why you cannot continue at this time
.say what action you would like to take

Dear sir,
I知 writing this letter to inform u that I will not be able to continue the computer diploma course from next month. i知 Malsha Perera and my student ID is 3990. Currently I知 working in a private company and I知 following this part time course while I知 working.
I have a great difficulty to attend the classes from next month because I知 going to be busy with my office work. Recently I was promoted to a new position in a different department in my company and I知 going to take up my new position from the beginning of November. So I would have to deal with challenges and I hope it will take much time to adopt myself. Furthermore I知 going to have a three months training which will be provided from the company.so most of the time I would have to stay after hours until I get used to new work. So, I don稚 think I could give much commitment and concentration on my studies.
I would like to temporary stop the computer course and restart after three months. I would deeply appreciate if u could consider my situation and help me to make necessary arrangements.
Thank you
Yours faithfully
Malsha Perera

1.i知 writing this letter to inform u that I will not be able to continue the computer diploma course from next month.
you write "u" it should be "you", dont use slang, this is a formal letter.

2. this letter should have date and address, which are parts of a letter.
Nov 13, 2013, 10:29am   #
malsha:
I知 writing this letter to inform u that I will not be able to continue the computer diploma course from next month.
........ you have to say either;
I will not be able to continue the diploma course ........... OR
I will not be able to attend the classes from next month
malsha:
i知 Malsha Perera and my student ID is 3990.

You need to start the letter with these details. First introduce yourself and then tell the purpose of writing. Then give reasons for such decision. Finally tell them what you plan to do.



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