And this will pave the way for a brighter future for people as responsibility is a main characteristic that people look in for during job interviews and all.
I think you should replace the second 'people' by 'employers'. I'm quite confused when I read to there
Due to this, the person involved in community services will have a great improvement on their social skills and will learn to better interact with others in society (how to interact with others in the society better and they might find some hidden potential within them like leadership qualities
The main subject in this sentence is 'person', but you use 'their' in 'their social skills'.
Such qualities and traits are highly in demand in the current job market, which will make sure that the young generation have bright future.
Well, your ideas are quite good but you need to pay a little more attention to the grammar!