should I add another information related to this prompt?
Well.. And not just with writing essays, but with everything we do, if we want to be effective we have to ask ourselves: what is the goal am trying to achieve with what I'm doing right now?
If the goal is to cause the reader to look favorably on you, then it is necessary to write in a way that causes people to have a good feeling and be inspired by what they're reading.
I think the best way to make a reader respond favorably is to communicate some information that will help the reader to know how serious you are about fulfilling your intentions. I think you left that position partly because of the need to take the next step toward accomplishing what is most important to you? It's sort of a cliche to talk about dreaming of world peace, but you do have strong values and a strong intention to achieve specific things. So it's great if you can add a sentence that tells more about what you are trying to do right now. : )