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'An excellent teacher and a good friend' - describe the best teacher you ever met


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Oct 22, 2011, 11:44am   #
I thought i would never met a perfect teacher any more, but quite amazingly, I met such one in my senior year of the college, professor Liu. God treats me well, but when compared with him, much inferior to that of him.

Generally speaking, when we describe someone with the word, perfect, literally means both his/her appearance and inner world are flawless, With regard to the former condition, to me, I have to say that he is such a person with Justin Bieber's charming smile, Robert Pattinson's sexual eyes, Chase Chawford's face. A person's appearance is important., but to me, the latter feather would me more critical.

He is excellent as an academic teacher.

In my memory, most of the other teacher were so serious and strict, so mean even giving a smile face in the class, and always trying to pretend to be very knowledge. Include some of the professors in the college. I reckoned I may no longer would have the opportunity to meet a really excellent teacher again until professor Liu. He teacher us process controlling engineering, which must seems a quite boring class. You may image such a picture, a old professor introducing some profound theories, on the blackboard you can you some complex formulas, while the students below, some may be busying taking notes and some may taking a nap, the whole class is so quite except the annoying sound produced by the professor-such a common scene in college classes, doesn't it? That is what I thought before the first class. But what came next is that when I came into the classroom, a handsome young man came into my eyes. And his charming smile, just like a bundle of sunshine, warmed my heart in such cold day. In addition, his teaching style always makes me fresh. And his abundant knowledge also shocks me. For example, when talking about feedback control system, he would use some funny stories to help us know better, which helps us to get the knowledge faster, as well as broaden our horizons.

He is a teacher with so many good qualities, tolerance, the one I most admire for.

Not like some teachers, too conceited about themselves that never bear different opinions exist. But to him, totally different. He always said to us that in such a plural society, there would inevitably be different opinions, the key was to deal with them in such a way that they could play a constructive rather destructive role, and whenever we had a different opinion with his, he would welcome us sharing with him at any time. More importantly, he practices what he preaches.

He is a good friend.

As i am preparing get my master's degree in America, where professor Liu spent six years at Yale. He knows exactly about the whole procedure of applying universities, even better than intermediary. He helps me a lot on my way to success. Also, he talks many cultures about America, which may be notably crucial to my latter life there.

In total, he is a such a perfect teacher. It is our honor with professor Liu to be as our teacher.

Oct 23, 2011, 11:06pm   #
I thought i would never met meet a perfect teacher any more, but quite amazingly, I met such one in my senior year of the college, professor Liu.

God treats me well, but when compared with him, much inferior to that of him.---------- I think this sentence lacks a nice flow and therefore your idea does not properly conveyed. Also I'm not sure whether this sentence adds much value to your essay since you try to compare your teacher with yourself, a student. I think you better avoid the comparison part and tell what is so great about him that would make the reader believe that he is a perfect teacher.
Oct 23, 2011, 11:28pm   #
He is a teacher with so many good qualities, tolerance, the one I most admire for.( such as what ? you said qualitie(s) and mentioned only one).
Oct 24, 2011, 08:57am   #
dumi:
God treats me well, but when compared with him, much inferior to that of him.---------- I think this sentence lacks a nice flow and therefore your idea does not properly conveyed. Also I'm not sure whether this sentence adds much value to your essay since you try to compare your teacher with yourself, a student. I think you better avoid the comparison part and tell what is so great about him that would make the reader believe that he is a perfect teacher.

Ok, I'll delete it.

jkal:
He is a teacher with so many good qualities, tolerance, the one I most admire for.( such as what ? you said qualitie(s) and mentioned only one).

Maybe I'll add some qualities here. How about this: He is a teacher with so many good qualities, confidence, Smartness, Humor, and so force. But tolerance, the one I most admire for.



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